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Aug 3Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

I really like it when you named the place Mocasar or the character Sultan of Paloe like I can see it thru my eyes and feels so real

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I'm happy that enjoy the story. And thank you so much for your support, I really appreciate that 😊.

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Really enjoyed this intro, this was a story that was hard to put down!

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Jan 18Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Thought you did a great job with the "soliloquy" at the start. It gave some info on the world, set up the character's amnesia, and moved right along after setting up the world. Good bit of action with the bandits too.

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