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May 30Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

No greater love any man known that he should give his life for you.

I love the way you seamlessly write faith into your fiction.

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Jun 8Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

This is great! I was not expecting the turn it took with the sign of the cross, nicely done!

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May 30Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Lovely. It felt so real, my heart bled for Sixteen.

Is the book at Amazon, Michael, because I cannot find it. Unless it’s the one about The Inquisitor.

Thank you!

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Thanks for the kind words, Meenaz. Glad you enjoyed the story.

As for the book, I assume you're talking about the "support my work" spiel, so yes the novel in question is Inquisitor's Promise which is on Amazon. If you're asking about this story in particular (Iniquity of the Federation), it's not in any book being sold at the moment. It's a weekly Substack serial at the moment.

In the future, I hope to release a short story compilation and Iniquity will most likely be a part of that. But there's nothing concrete yet.

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May 30Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

I’d love to read a complete book about Sixteen! Iniquity sounds wonderful. I’ll definitely follow the Serial. It may be a first for me, because I don’t like to read weekly chapters, I get so impatient because I want to continue reading and know more about the characters and how the story ends. Lol. Hence why I never read the chapters some authors send us in their newsletters. I prefer to wait for the book. But this story has captured my attention a lot!

Thank you, Michael!

All the best.

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