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Intriguing Michael! Thank you!

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Jan 27Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Does the Electrosphere have a Redemption story? How does it differ from Earth's and how are they reconciled/integrated?

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Interesting question (that's why it took a while for me to respond lol). The Electrosphere though technically another dimension is also a part of the Earth since it's located in Earth's atmosphere. It is a part of Earth just as the Moon is.

As for a Redemption story, there's only one redemption story, the one that happened in Calvary. In this universe, that means the mission of evangelizing extends beyond "Earth-proper" and into the Electrosphere also.

Hope that makes sense.

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Feb 6·edited Feb 6Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Thanks. I've often wondered how openly Christian writers deal with the redemption story, if it factors at all in theor work. I like Lewis' use of Aslan. Tolkien really doesn't include the concept in LOTR.

Not suggesting a right answer.

To add a bit, once you combine worlds with different stories, that becomes an issue to deal with.

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Jun 29, 2023Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Very cool!

I think creating worlds is one of the most fun things we get to do as writers. I've never shared publicly any of this kind of worldbuilding, but I always think it's cool to see.

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Love the bewildering SCALE of the history. The amount of avenues open to you with this setting are infinite while also distinct from pretty much anything I can think of. Bravo, can't wait to read Inquistor's Promise and see what other stories you tell within this Grand Narrative.

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Jun 29, 2023·edited Jun 29, 2023Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Bravo, very well done! Intricate, detailed, and extremely fascinating. I'm almost inspired to do something similar for my fantasy world of Cyron.

https://joshtatter.substack.com/s/the-chronicles-of-cyron

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Heh. I'm happy to be an inspiration, Josh.

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Oh wow, I love this! It’s a very well-thought out and plausible construction of a grand timeline, it’s brilliant! And, of course, the images do it great justice! :D

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Jun 29, 2023·edited Jun 29, 2023Author

Thanks, Sujan. I had the most fun getting and putting this images in.

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Well done. It's always fun to read about the worlds that other people create.

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Thanks, Joseph. Glad you liked it.

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