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Oct 15Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Yep, saw that coming. The psych-core officer needs to be shut up. The Colonel's and General did the right thing.

It was a satisfying ending to the story. You did great.

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A tragic ending but I could see how this story might have gone into one more chapter as the lovebirds figured things out a little more. As a princess, I am surprised she gave all of that up so easily for a earthborn non-com soldier.

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Oct 15Liked by Michael P. Marpaung

Thanks for the mention and for this interesting story.

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Well this worked out nicely. I just caught up. This was wonderful to read this and the finale was bittersweet. Well done 👍

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