Aeneas has to keep his promises. His father's mission will be completed. And while he's at it, he will become Galatea's lord and Inquisitor. But love and politics are an explosive combination.
Nicely done. The battle was well written, as were the terse communications between the Inquisitor. By the way, I'm getting a little tire of the interlocuter word. I understand why you use it, but it's never used in what I feel is the right way. Maybe it's just me, but when it's two people, another word could be used. I'd normally use The person's name, or rank, or title. Like I said, maybe it's just me.
Nicely done. The battle was well written, as were the terse communications between the Inquisitor. By the way, I'm getting a little tire of the interlocuter word. I understand why you use it, but it's never used in what I feel is the right way. Maybe it's just me, but when it's two people, another word could be used. I'd normally use The person's name, or rank, or title. Like I said, maybe it's just me.
No worries. I appreciate your feedback.