The opening of the ancient gate had been ominous. Down on Earth, young Inquisitor Aeneas Aquilanus was blissfully unaware that his life was going to change forever.
Your writing is excellent, and I love the details. However, Honda Suzuki? Really? But then, I can't say much about that, considering that I've named characters some weird names. Is it just that in the 71st century, they consider those names important? I might have called the older woman Ruriko or Reina.
(Whispers) The cringe is strong in this one.
Your writing is excellent, and I love the details. However, Honda Suzuki? Really? But then, I can't say much about that, considering that I've named characters some weird names. Is it just that in the 71st century, they consider those names important? I might have called the older woman Ruriko or Reina.
Ha ha, I'm a big proponent of "theme naming" or "meaningful names" in my characters.
Anyways, thanks for your comments. I've been enjoying them.